The Official Writing Challenge
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This story has a very special charm, so warm and cozy. I felt as though I were there, seeing the dogs and the children and experiencing autumn anew. Many creative lines as well. Very well done.
Very well told. Sweet story. Good descriptions. I can almost smell the waffles.
Very good writing. I loved your use of description on almost every sentence. Fits the piece perfectly. When writing about something, relevant details are super important.You've nailed that aspect.
I loved being a part of this woman's musings. Great job and I love the waffle tradition.
A charming story with a lovely sweet mood to it. Thanks for sharing. Colin
What a great first entry! You're a very good writer and I enjoyed reading this story. I, too, marvel at how "traditions" came be so accidental. Great job.
Ok, so I'm a romantic. Coffee in hand, morning sun streaming in, dog sleeping in my lap, quilt wrapped around me, all we need is the crackling fire. NIce work.
What a great piece of writing. You'll place high with this one! Kudos!