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Very poignant story; tenderness blended with the starkness of life's seasons. Written from the heart to tweak the spirit's weariness.

Thank you for invoking God's loving Spirit into our sometimes sagging souls. I look forward to more of your efforts.

Shalom! :)

I really liked this. It was written with such faith in God by both husband and wife. It's sad to loose someone, you showed that. It's sad to leave someone, you showed that. But the overall feeling you left me with was that both these characters were fully trusting God. Good Job!
Remarkable! Extremely well done.Very spiritual.
Awesome writing. I was touched by the tenderness, and the trust both of your MC's showed.