The Official Writing Challenge
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Good writing.
I like this. Good descriptions.
Your descriptions were very good.I could see the scenes in my minds eye as I read.
Hi Cathy! Thank you for your kind and helpful critique. I thought you were right that some parts didn't flow smoothly and needed work so I'm going to work on it a little more.

Like the others said, this is a great article and the descriptions are imaginative, poetic, and nostalgic. I hope I can learn to write descriptions like you do. Three thumbs up! God bless.