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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Birth (infancy) (08/20/09)

TITLE: Heaven's Preview
By Patricia Protzman
08/27/09


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Heavenís Preview

A scene is played over and over in my mind
I am in heaven with the Lord I hear His voice
It is your time to be born child you are assigned
To be a witness for me be thankful rejoice

Your parents are eagerly awaiting your birth
They have waited nine months your time is very near
A place has been prepared for you to live on earth
You will come to love them and hold them very dear

Remember I love you and have died for your sins
There will be many joys but also many tears
There will be a little grief but many blessings
Satan will tempt you often causing many fears

My life on earth is revealed God is at my side
Never fear my child I will always be with you
Continue to pray only trust Me and abide
Have faith love be obedient and remain true

My hands cover my eyes and I sense so much fear
The events are scary and darkness looms about
Just then the angels fly over me coming near
Salvation unto our God and the Lamb they shout

Heaven opens up and I find myself falling
The earth soon appears from out of the darkest night
I hear the Lord Godís voice He is close and calling
You will be back my child I have you in my sight

As time has passed and I have thought about this scene
I do not know if it was real perhaps a dream
What is important knowing my Savior and Lord
Returning to heaven receiving my reward


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Deana Thomas08/29/09
I Love This Poem! It's perspective is very unique and your words are well chosen. It's hard to read without punctuation. I found myself reading it very slowly, inserting punctuation where it's needed. I very much enjoyed "Heaven's Preview."
Yvonne Blake 08/29/09
Great poem! Nice thoughts.