The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/09
This was very good. It really drew me in. Great job of writing it!~
08/28/09
Ahhh... I love happy endings!
A great story with nice pace. The outcome was predictable but it did not take away from the enjoyment of the story. You are on the write (right) tract.
I like the easy style you have in your writing. Easy to follow and entertaining. Your dialogue could be a little stonger if you put the mannerisms of the MC into how she tells her husband what she needs to tell him. Good Job -- Keep writing!