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08/17/05
An enjoyable read, nice work getting into Saul's mindset :)
08/18/05
Clever! I felt that some word choices made the piece a little hard to read - or that it may be for some. It took on the feel of the King James Version. I liked the portrayal of Saul and the evident "holier than thou" attitude. Truly a great work!
08/22/05
Julianne, great job of getting into Saul's head. As mentioned already, his 'holier than thou' attitude came through well. I liked the quip about never going to sea again too! Karen
08/25/05
What an interesting take on the theme! I never really think much about Saul pre-Damascus. Good job!