The Official Writing Challenge
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08/30/09
What a neat story you told - thanks for sharing this piece of your life. yes, God IS good. Always.
09/03/09
Verna: I really enjoyed this story of yours. It read very smoothly and I saw no misspelled words or grammar problems. What a wonderful life both you and your daughter have had with your respective mates. You must have been an excellent example to have your daughter follow your footsteps. Great job! Laura
09/09/09

Endearing article here and it brought back my own "challenges" in becoming a mother for the first time! We think we're all grown up...til life shows us the REAL stuff.

Good writing. A tad bit of editing would polish your writing to a smoother read, such as punctuation and sentence organization. Otherwise, you're doing great!