The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very cute! I like your title too. In the second sentence, it might be easier to read if you put a period after "they really have not hurt me." Make the next sentence simply "I am scared.", leaving out the 'but'. I'm a beginner too, as more senior writers will have noticed from my funky punctuation in the previous sentence i wrote! I know it's wrong, I just need to find out the proper way to do it! *sheepish grin* I loved your perspective from the baby's point of view! Very creative.