The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/09
What a beautiful story..great writing. I felt real emotion while reading it...nicely done..
08/28/09
You created a beautiful picture of the enduring love of a father for his son, the relentless faith of the father and an emotion packed ending, it was very touching and effective to have both earthy and heavenly Father voice the same words at the "birth" of their new son.
Excellent writing.
08/29/09
Great story. So sad that so many parents try to mold their children into their own vision when the scriptures tell us to raise up a child in the way he should go and when he is old he will not depart from it. To me, that means the gifts God has placed in each individual at birth. Many parents can identify with your story. I certainly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing it.
Bravo!!