The Official Writing Challenge
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I felt your joy as you talked about bringing your bald baby boy into the world. I related to your befuddledness (is that a word?) as you sort of muddled along learning how to care for him. That was endearing. I especially loved how at the very end you wrapped it up with humor. It left me laughing.

You are good at helping the reader sort of experience your feelings with you. I enjoyed your story. Thanks
09/01/09
Been there and done that!
Great job!Ya gotta laugh right!Blessings to you . Keep going!Ruth Brown
Ihad to chuckle over your poor confused parents even as I related to them. :-) This is a terrific piece of writing. Please keep at it!