The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 479 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
08/22/09
I like this.

I got a bit confused with the characters, for some reason. I was thinking Crocus was a personification of Christ, which didn't make a whole lot of sense to me, since they were waiting for the Sonlight. but this was probably just me.

Overall, a great job!
08/25/09
Very good imagery. I could sense the purity of the speaking flower and the coldness of evil.
08/25/09
Very imaginative. Your style reminds me of C.S. Lewis. I like your writing very much.