The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/09
Good flow throughout this sad story. Felt the ending was tied up a bit too quickly and neatly, but liked this anyway.
08/24/09
Oh, wow! A good lesson in being careful what you wish for. This was definitely heart-breaking. Keep writing!
08/25/09
I like your style of writing - you made this sad story very interesting. Thanks - Colin