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08/17/05
A touching poem of hope.
08/20/05
"Brilliant!" You should be at a higher level. You have a wonderful gift of poetry! "Well Done"
Laurie - This is a powerful piece. It seems you have effectively broken down the process of "sightseeing" into "depriving, believing, trying, seeing, noticing, listening, receiving, realizing, reflecting!" In a nutshell, this is "living" the Christian life! I like the image of the pretty little box - such a sweet, and perhaps small, thing that literally revolutionizes this person's life. PTL, jood job!
"Realizing the beauty /
Of seeing with her heart. / Receiving more / Than her eyes alone could behold."
Masterful. Well written. Thanks for sharing.

08/22/05
Nice piece..good title and good relay of the message. God bless ya, littlelight