The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/09
You have created a dreamlike quality of atmosphere in this piece of writing and used images that are fresh and interesting. I'm assuming English is not your birth language. If I'm right let me encourage you to keep working on your English skills. Try to find someone local who can help you with Englisn expression and grammar. :-)
08/25/09
Interesting dream!
I had a little trouble following your plot..but often that's the way with dreams.
keep writing