The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/09
Well told and very sweet!

"No two of them were alike and yet, they could all move through the sky together, playing with the wind, and then, rest peacefully on the ground, appreciating the cold." love this line!
08/25/09
Short and Sweet! You packed tons of meaning in such a short space. I envisioned a young girl in a wheel chair, although none was mentioned. I loved her acceptance of the situation, and the fact that she did not give in to self pity. Very inspirational.