The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/09
This read like an entry in a diary to me. Although I enjoyed it because I grew up in a Chicago suburb--and could recall similar scenes--I think the story needs a bit of life pumped into it.
08/25/09
Good memories!
08/27/09
As a Southerner, who hardly ever saw snow, I enjoyed the mental images your entry brought to my mind... 1968... 18 inches in Memphis on the first days of spring is about as close to your story as I have ever come. (But that was a rare and wonderful occurance.)
08/27/09
Lots of interesting information there. Have you thought about taking your experiences and creatively crafting them into a ficional story?