The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this little devotional walk with you - very nice imagery. I can just taste that nice hot chocolate at the end too. :)
08/20/09
It was a very descriptive piece. Breaking it into more paragraphs would help us to pause, so we could enjoy each vibrant cluster of your word pictures even more.
08/26/09
You have a delightful way of describing nature that brings it fresh to my eyes. Good work.
08/27/09
Having been in several ice storms, it is indeed amazing how beautiful they can be despite their destructive nature.