The Official Writing Challenge
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Some insightful observations here - like the smallest tribe of Israel and the shortest days. Keep an eye on your tenses (use chose instead of choose in this context for instance).
Really good on substance and character...only a few minor mistakes with grammar, such as: "Like God choose" should be “chose”.

But these minor mistakes did not take away from your interesting perspective! Really enjoyed this!

Thanks for sharing.

May God bless and always keep you writing!

Dan Blankenship
Like the others, I enjoyed the interesting take on the winter season. There were a few grammatical errors, but they did not take away from my interest.