The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/09
How vitally important those wedding vows are, especially in a culture so obsessed with fulfilling one's own personal dreams.
On my first read through I assumed Dylan was Alice's husband. Then I went back and guessed that he was the son. On the third read through I haven't been able to decide!
I was a little confused about who Dylan actually was as well - her son?

A good story and a nice piece of writing.
08/13/09
Noel, this is very good. I like how you described the woman's illness. I think her husband left her and the son took on his father's responsibility.