The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/09
What a lovely story! So realistic and fun! Your characters are quite diverse and evoked differing emotions.

A good down-to-earth story telling. Spoken from the heart of a nine-year-old. Good job!
08/13/09
Congrats on your win!
This leaves me smiling at the wizened insights of this nine year, seven month old child. The voice is perfectly done. Congratulations on your EC win!
08/13/09
Most grownups are not as wise as your 9 year and 7 month old MC. Great story. Congratulations on your first place win on your level, and your EC placing.
Lisa
08/13/09
Great dialect, wonderful voice for this innocent babe. His faith in Jesus, and his not understanding why grownups don't just let Him do the worrying is excellent. Big huge congrats on you EC - well deserved. Great entry. :) Cat
08/13/09
I enjoyed your story immensely! Dialogue was just right, and the message was clear as a bell. (I imagined the MC was a girl! Could it have been?) Congrats on your win!

08/19/09
Hi really loved the innocence of this story, beautifully written, congrats on your win, really deserved.