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This was so sweet! And so true... children sure know how to make us feel young. Beautiful depiction of the cycle of life.
08/06/09
How true! And a pleasure to read.
Oh, I love this. I'm providing daycare for a four-year-old and learning to see the world between her eyes. Kudos to you. This was great!
08/09/09
An enjoyable piece. Good work.
08/10/09
Loved the reality of this. Good job!
08/13/09
Congratulations on your story receiving highly commended status. I read it with great pleasure. I loved the title. I loved the way the MC found himself rejuvenated by his own child first, and then his grandchild. Reminds me of my own Dad rollerskating with his six grandchildren when he was in his sixties.
Lisa
08/21/09
Lovely and warm.
Brought a smile to my face.
Nicely done.

Congratulations on your high commendation!