The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/09
I have thought these same thoughts over the last few years. Thanks for putting words to them.
I like the message you portrayed. As something to work on...it seemed to run on in a couple of spots. I think you could cut out a few unnecessary words, making it more concise.
08/07/09
I almost wrote about the same thing but the words would not come.Maybe because my dad is still living. I share your sentiment that we will always feel like a child until we no longer have a parent.Thanks for sharing your heart.