The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/09
Sweet story! I enjoyed your matching the tree's growth with Ms. Maggie's.
08/09/09
A sweet story. Remember to make your opening paragraph contain strong word choices. Maybe one or two vivid adjectives for the tree, rather than three ordinary ones. This will draw the reader in to the story. Good work, overall.
I love it! Great parallelism with the tree. :D