The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/09
An engaging story that reminded me to be grateful for my health! Wonderful message in there!
08/07/09
The phrase that stood out to me was "being burned alive by the fiery trials of life"...this story had the ring of reality to it. Good job expressing the MC's feelings.
08/08/09
This is a well-written piece. Good work.