The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/09
I really loved your story! It went with the theme very well and is a unique approach.

"You need to grow up!" Passing along words of wisdom to those who follow, especially spiritually, in Christ.

The young friend receiving the message is certainly blessed. Good writing!
08/12/09
The repetition of the words, "You need to grow up!" really hammer home the message you are giving. Some people, no matter their age, don't grow ever grow up spiritually. They remain "babes in Christ" expecting MILK, instead of maturing to the stage of being able to digest the MEAT of the Word...I am sure your message will be a blessing and a help to many...Helen