The Official Writing Challenge
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Enjoyed this! I loved the angle you took on the topic.
08/07/09
That woman sure understands the importance of balance. I particularly enjoyed the romantic side to your tale
08/07/09
Absolutely loved your story! It flowed along smoothly and kept my attention to the very last word!
08/08/09
A sweet story. Realistic descriptions and natural dialogue brought these characters to life. Good work.
08/11/09
Really great writing here. I loved the way this couple interacts and works things out. Good job!
08/11/09
Great storytelling, good writing. Interesting and on topic.

mona
You carved every description perfectly! I could smell, taste, and see everything. Great work!
08/13/09
Wow! What a great story. Well deserving of the level placement. I could just see the situations so clearly...from the food fight...to the tender scene on the couch. Congratulations.
Lisa
Congratulations on moving up to Level 2!