The Official Writing Challenge
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I have read about fifteen of the beginners' entries, and this is by far the most poignant to the topic. Indeed, becoming an adult is a difficult journey. Well written!
08/06/09
I liked this girl! I liked her attitude and her honesty. You did a wonderful job of transforming all those thoughts and feelings into a story.
08/08/09
The start of adulthood is difficult and you captured it well. An extra return between each paragraph will make it easier to read. Good job in this piece.
08/11/09
Really REALLY loved this story. I found myself reminiscing my own early adulthood right down to the mismatched furniture, chipped plates and stack of bills. Great writing!
08/11/09
WONDERFUL first entry!!! You brought out the fear and frustration and loneliness of the MC so well. Super story for the topic, too

For ease of reading, you should leave a blank space between paragraphs; but don't worry, it won't count against you the way you have it. :) Welcome to the challenge!
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Cat
08/12/09
Very good entry. Shows you have writing skill. The story has just the right touch. Believable. Genuine. Keep writing.
Mona
08/12/09
Great first entry! This is definitely something a lot of us can relate to, starting out and dealing with the insecurity, uncertainity and everything else that lumps together when it comes to this "growing up" business. Great job!