The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice story, I like how you showed the contrast between the teenager's view of adulthood and the reality.
08/08/09
Good writing in this piece. I liked the contrast between the characters.
08/10/09
We all have wanted to grow up too fast at one time or another and once we're here, the responsibilities can be overwhelming. Great job on this story!
08/12/09
I agree that you have done well in showing how one person's perception can be so different from reality. I read the story several times just to savor the effect.
Lisa