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07/30/09
I liked this piece about the Stork. It was light-hearted and received well. I especially liked when you said "hold their family homes dear in their feather brains." It put a big smile on my face. Thanks for sharing.
I love stories about the delicate balance of God in nature. Good sense start and finish.
07/30/09
Storks - what a good way to show spring, and real too. I liked this a lot.
07/31/09
Made me think of how I feel returning to my parents home...relaxed, welcome and not afraid to be me! Good story!
08/03/09
This is very informative. The only time I've ever thought of storks was when they carry little bundles of joy to our homes:) Is that sad or what? LOL.