The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/05
WOW! Family relationships sure are tough. Why can't we take time to listen? Why do we assume we know what the other person is thinking and going to say? Why did God give us 2 ears and only 1 mouth, when He knew we wouldn't take time to use our ears? I'm just full of questions today. Thanks for sharing.
08/17/05
A lesson we all can relate to -from one perspective, or both! thanks!
08/18/05
Good message! Using punctuation will help with the clarity of your writing.
I like the message. It is one that many can relate. Seeing ourselves in our children. I think the first few sentences could have been stronger by nixing the adverbs and painting more of a picture of the argument. Maybe even putting in the dialogue you were witnessing.
Ditto for above comments. A creative take on the topic. Thanks for sharing.
08/21/05
I really liked the relationship between your story, and the ending by spelling out what sightseeing means to you. A really good lesson. God bless ya, littlelight