The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
The pain of grief is tangible in your writing. In fact, I've got tears welling up from reading it. You express her drawing inward & self-imposed loneliness so well. Thank you for allowing her to Spring Forward. Well-written.
Springing forward from grief can be a slow and painful process. I love how you used the lady bugs to tie her past in with her future. Good writing!
08/01/09
A sweet story about dealing with grief. I enjoyed reading it.