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Topic: Spring (the season) (07/23/09)
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TITLE: A children's picture story: Fred the Flower. | Previous Challenge Entry
By Josiah Kane
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Note to parents: encourage your child to guess the words represented by the pictures. You can check the actual word by holding your mouse pointer over the picture.
Fred the Flower:
Fred's started to ring. Fred as he rolled slowly out of bed. Suddenly he noticed that there was light coming through his . It was only six o'clock but the was already peeking over the . Without turning off the , ran outside. All his friends came happily into the . bowed to Rose who shyly from behind the of her house. He happily towards the rising . He politely greeted Mr. and Mrs. as they danced merrily beneath the in the warm fresh air. He giggled at the skipping down the . Then gazed up at the , and thought of sprinkling down as the kept shining down on his . and his friends played happily all day long.
Spring had finally arrived.
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I definitely have to give you hats off and credits for such a creative piece! This is definitely a first for FW, I do believe, but I loved this short children's tale. This was lovely! Kudos to you!
And the skill that must have gone into creating those pictures... fantastic!!
Also, I think it can be said that Spring was so well described with so few words.
A+
Mona
Way cool!