The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/09
I've been there, too, viewing a new home in winter and feeling depressed, only to find joy and new life in spring.
You may want to watch editing for punctuation and not depend too much on spell check.
08/01/09
Lots of great thoughts here. What an awesome spring that would have been to see what was living under all the snow and leaves. SURPRISE!!! Good job!
08/02/09
I like this story a lot. Do be careful with proofreading your stories and make sure there is double spacing between paragraphs.
08/04/09
A good peice of descrptive writing. I could visualise the place in the autumn and as you moved in. There are a few little words missing and editing mistakes in the last paragraph. It is a short peice so remember to check it through carefully and even read it aloud to yourself to make sure it is all correct. That is all just editing and practice, your ideas and ability to write well is all there. I look forward to more about thislittle house!