The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
well done. I apreciate the story and your angle to it!
07/30/09
I really like the little background story on each flower and how you came to like each one. I have to admit, however, that I didn't quite understand your final sentence. It seemed like such an abrupt way to end this lovely story. Laura
08/03/09
This is very cute:) I'm baffled by flowers, too. They shouldn't be soo high maintenance, you know? Water, weed... ergh:) But they are so pretty. Thanks for a very well-written entry and very cleverly written at that.
08/04/09
I liked this idea. I liked your descriptions of the flowers. I would have preferred that the flower you described came out of thge ones you named in the word BAFFLED as I dont know what some of them are -- and am baffled.
But I LIKE your ending. He he It is good you get several opinions on your peice.Are all the flowers you use for BAFFLED spring ones? daffodils yes but that little detail is important too.
08/06/09
I enjoyed your "transplant" take on this region's flowers. You did lots of clever, interesting things in your entry, and it was very well written.
08/06/09
I enjoyed the creativity in this piece. Good work.