The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the way this story was written with the analogy at the end. Regarding paragraph three, did you mean to use the word "son" instead of "sun" for a reason or was it just an oversight? Very nicely written. Laura
I liked the use of the name "Joshua" as it is a name that means "Jehovah is salvation."
What a neat surprise ending! Enjoyed this story.
Loved the ending, didn't see it coming. Great job!
A lovely peice. I enjoyed to read it but I would actually like a different name for the character because I kept thinking is this going to be the "bible joshua" and the field to be in the promised land . Still that is clearly only a personal view. Thanks for the clear and informative writing. What is a "back 40" only puzzle.?