Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login

Four Ways For A Christian Writer To Win A Publishing Package HERE

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge



how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level


submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners

Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.



how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Spring (the season) (07/23/09)

TITLE: Moving Forward
By Ruth Rater


Moving Forward

As I glance tentatively out the window, the first thing I notice is the clean sunlight dancing off of the dew on the early morning flowers. How many days has it been since I ventured outside? How many more will I keep myself closed in? I know it is the first day of spring Ė my calendar has told me so, yet Iím torn between the longing to release myself from this self-imposed prison of grief and the fear of leaving part of myself behind.

Just a few short months ago mom and I were planning our annual trip together. ďIt just isnít fairĒ the grieving part of me cried. ďI donít want to do this life without her!Ē I start to turn away from the window, angry that life is bursting outside as if it didnít concern itself with the deep ache in my heart, but I canít. I have my arms wrapped around myself trying to hug the pain away. I am 20 years old and have lost my mother, my best friend, and I donít know what to do without her.

Through another endless stream of tears, something outside catches my eye. It is a tiny butterfly. Suddenly something mom told me one day came to mind. She had said that someone told her that butterflies were Godís way of letting us know that people we love are always with us. I realized I was holding my breath. Could it be true? Was mom out there calling me to come outside? Without really thinking about it, I felt myself open the door. I took two small steps onto the porch and just stood there.

The sunlight was dazzling, the smell of the fresh spring morning forced its way into me and I was instantly filled with hope. A sliver of the grief melted from my shoulders that were weary of despair. I frantically looked around for the butterfly until I noticed it on a flower in the garden mom planted last winter. I realized that I wasnít alone. Mom was here Ė her touch of love in every flower, her love of life and God securely etched in my heart. God was there too. I felt his presence like a blanket of warmth and grace pulled around me.

The journey is laid out before me. God, mom, and I will walk together. Spring is a good place to start.

The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be right now. CLICK HERE

JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.

This article has been read 340 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Dawne Biggs07/30/09
Wonderful story that made me tear up. It feels so real to me as I lost my mom too. Thanks for having the courage to write it.
Laura Manley07/30/09
Losing a mother is hard; I know, I've lost mine as well. I found this story to be very well written and flowed well from one thought to the next. Thank you for sharing. Laura
diana kay08/04/09
well so poignient and a heartfelt take on the theme. I love the butterfly, in the UK we dont get those until summer is well in. Thanks because this is clearly a peice that tugs chords with many
diana kay08/06/09
well done on the highly commended placement!
Seema Bagai 08/06/09
A beautifully written piece. I enjoyed reading it. Congrats on the placement.