The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
I love this story. Finding the ring later in the story was a great little twist. Thanks for sharing.
08/01/09
Wow! So many treasures retrieved within the disappearing snow. (Hopefully your mc will put things away before the next winter.) Good story!
08/03/09
This is a cute story. I was confused about the age of the child, though. She sounded much older - unless she was thinking back and then it would need to be rewritten a bit. Very, very good job.
08/04/09
lovely ! Lovely! hope you get a winning place. so tenderly warmly written. I can see it all through the eyes of the child as well as imaging myself observing the kid happily rooting around.