The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
Can't say I really understood the punchline, but all-in-all it's a powerful short piece. Great, image-forming descriptions!
07/26/09
Forgive me, but I am a little confused as to what your story has to do with the topic for the Writing Challenge. Your imagery is good, but I just have missed something in this story. Laura
07/27/09
Very good descriptions and so good material here but too many unanswered questions. Why was this teen eating her and with whom. Was it a first date? Some mystery can be good but there was room in the word count to expand this a little. Well done and keep writing!