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08/08/05
The Comforter! Good writing. Keep it up!
08/09/05
What truth! Being busy and not making time for God is such a problem for many of us, thanks for the reminder. I really enjoyed this.
08/09/05
Well told - good character reflection.
Well done! You have communicated your message well through your character Carol. A great reminder that our 'retreat'is always there - we just have to take the time to enjoy it.
08/11/05
Pretty well told, watch the reduntant first words.
Sweet message! If only we would all lay our head in his lap more often!
Tender! Reminds me of a time at a ballet (I always wanted to dance as a child) when I was overwhelmed with the sense that I was holding a newborn baby. Later, it became obvious that the Lord was holding me in that moment, and my unrealized dreams to express myself in dance; I was literally cradled in His arms. I bawled all through the second act! I enjoyed reading this very much. :-)
08/15/05
Congratulations! Very nicely written article about a situation many experience & far too many fail to arrive at.
08/16/05
Congratulations, Carol. Beautiful piece. I love the comparison of your head in your mother's lap and it being God's lap all along. In Him th