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The Comforter! Good writing. Keep it up!
What truth! Being busy and not making time for God is such a problem for many of us, thanks for the reminder. I really enjoyed this.
Well told - good character reflection.
Well done! You have communicated your message well through your character Carol. A great reminder that our 'retreat'is always there - we just have to take the time to enjoy it.
Pretty well told, watch the reduntant first words.
Sweet message! If only we would all lay our head in his lap more often!
Tender! Reminds me of a time at a ballet (I always wanted to dance as a child) when I was overwhelmed with the sense that I was holding a newborn baby. Later, it became obvious that the Lord was holding me in that moment, and my unrealized dreams to express myself in dance; I was literally cradled in His arms. I bawled all through the second act! I enjoyed reading this very much. :-)
Congratulations! Very nicely written article about a situation many experience & far too many fail to arrive at.
Congratulations, Carol. Beautiful piece. I love the comparison of your head in your mother's lap and it being God's lap all along. In Him th