The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/09
Your story kept my interest all the way through. (If you could get a space between the paragraphs it would make it easier to read.) Good story and good message.
07/27/09
a very dramatic story. I read it thinking well this could happen at any time not just teenagers but you pointed it towards the theme neatly by the daignosis and the explanation. Thak you for writing this.