The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really good and so potentially true of an adolescent's thoughts and situations. Your theme was captured well.
I like the creative way you portrayed each of the teenage years. You packed a lot of thoughts and feelings into seven short verses!
Great job! You got all the years in there and captured each one well. I enjoyed the trans progression.
What a nice technique! I enjoyed it year by year, smiling all the way. Adults don't want to admit it, but the progress actually continues on and on and on. I wonder if anybody could draft that saga all the way to age 100?