The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh to have loved and lost. LOL. I'm glad that she had an Archie, someone sweet and kind for her first kiss. That was good! It was a slightly sad ending that he was gone, but maybe he'll come back, right? If you love something let it go? ^_^ Cute story.
Loved the way I could "feel" the emotion of the characters. Thanks for sharing this glimpse into unconditional love. A truly heart-touching story.

This was such a beautiful story. How I could relate to it in so many ways! You wonderfully captured that feeling of when we move away from God, and how He so gently draws us back to Him. Beautifully written and wonderfully inspiring. Great job!
This was such a sweet story. Left me rooting for them to stay in touch and make a life together.
well done into highly commended with only your second challenge peice. Shows you have the gift there to develop. Well done and look forward to reading more of you entries!