The Official Writing Challenge
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i loved this article. Everyone has had at least one of these moments described at least once.
07/23/09
I found some of my best friends on the outside looking in. Wonderful story.
07/24/09
Been there more than once in my life. Good job!
My Sue was a girl named Carol. Very real and true to life. Keep on writing!
07/27/09
Relatable. It's obvious when one writes from the inside out.
A very nice and simple little poem that expresses such emotion and sad truth, ending in grace and triumph. Please, please, keep writing!
Nice poem on the hardships of being an outsider. Well written. Keep writing!
I liked this very much--a lot said in a few well chosen words about the awkwardness of a teen not in the "in" crowd.
07/29/09
This is excellent, the rhythm and the words you chose for it. You captured some good feeling and emotion, in so little. Amazing!
07/29/09
Thought provoking and raw. So true for many of us.
Mona
You made me feel what your MC was feeling. I liked this. Nicely done.