The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
i loved this article. Everyone has had at least one of these moments described at least once.
07/23/09
I found some of my best friends on the outside looking in. Wonderful story.
07/24/09
Been there more than once in my life. Good job!
07/24/09
My Sue was a girl named Carol. Very real and true to life. Keep on writing!
07/27/09
Relatable. It's obvious when one writes from the inside out.
07/28/09
A very nice and simple little poem that expresses such emotion and sad truth, ending in grace and triumph. Please, please, keep writing!
07/29/09
Nice poem on the hardships of being an outsider. Well written. Keep writing!
07/29/09
I liked this very much--a lot said in a few well chosen words about the awkwardness of a teen not in the "in" crowd.
07/29/09
This is excellent, the rhythm and the words you chose for it. You captured some good feeling and emotion, in so little. Amazing!
07/29/09
Thought provoking and raw. So true for many of us.
Mona
07/30/09
You made me feel what your MC was feeling. I liked this. Nicely done.