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A hummingbird darts back and forth; a blue green shimmer darting from one flower to the next. A monarch flutters its wings playfully; dark veins on orange. The sweet scent of the bee balm wafts past on the breeze and I taste a hint of honey.

Ladybugs rest on shasta daisies adding the a splash of crimson to the carpet of orange and white.

Each of these events is special, draw out what sets it apart form the norm so we can share your delight. You paint a lovely picture which would be all the more lovely with more shades.
07/20/09
This is wonderfully peaceful. I love your descriptions. I think I love every thing about this. Good job!