The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/09
Great detail - and I love the happy ending!
07/21/09
I'm glad your story had a happy ending. You shocked me at one phrase - what the h+++. Not sure it's appropriate at this site. I believe it can be left out and still have the meaning you wanted. I have a few single friends that truly feel this desperation you wrote about. Thank you for sharing this.