The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/09
Oh, I KNOW a lot of us can relate to this story! I have most definitely been there. What a creative take on the topic!
07/20/09
Wonderful little twist with such a vivid sense of the real moment.

Loved the natural tone to voice of your writing.

Also, a clear example of writing what you know!

Good work!
07/21/09
Enjoyed reading this - I hit the button too fast and submit something that should be worked on more! Where are you going for the cruise?
07/23/09
What great fun. I think I need your mother's number!