The Official Writing Challenge
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Very interesting analogy and thanks for sharing this thoughtful devotional.
Wonderful analogy.
Good devotional thoughts. Dividing this into more paragraphs would make it easier to read. Good job.
Thank you for sharing this effective devotional using the metaphor of a summer harvest!
You did something new with a familiar analogy. It could be tightened a bit and your average sentence length was a bit long (current conventional wisdom says it should be in the 23-25 word range. I thought the prayer was a good way to end--very powerful.
In a book I am reading, one of the characters says something of gardening. She tells the MC you know a tomato is ripe when it falls easily into your hand at the slightest tug. It takes patience and wisdom. Your insightful devotional shows this well.
Great analogy. I like this a lot.
Highly effective metaphor for the power of waiting for God's time.

I appreciated how your patient development of the thought was in keeping with the lesson.

Well done.