The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/09
This is a fun story. I loved Judah's compassion for his mom and his willingness to help her out financially first, then save for the derby. There are a lot of good descriptions in your entry. Keep up the good work!
07/19/09
A well-written, enjoyable story. I liked the creative angle of the derby.