The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/05
Salve to my heart!
08/09/05
Very very nice -the only thing I thought I'd change would be "I belong to the Lord thy God" to "my God" -it fits with the more personal tone of the poem.
08/11/05
Personally meaningful, thank you for posting.
Your poem dellights in the "Quiet Time" with God. These times are so precious to those of us who believe that we can identify with your poem.