The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/05
Salve to my heart!
08/09/05
Very very nice -the only thing I thought I'd change would be "I belong to the Lord thy God" to "my God" -it fits with the more personal tone of the poem.
08/11/05
Personally meaningful, thank you for posting.
08/12/05
Your poem dellights in the "Quiet Time" with God. These times are so precious to those of us who believe that we can identify with your poem.