The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/09
This is a very moving story and one which brought me joy in reading it. I think the "summer" topic was told in such a way that it was not obvious to the reader. I liked that about the story. When you submit your writings, you may want to check to make certain you have spaces between paragraphs. I know when I submit a story, as I scroll down, it is obvious that the paragraphs are bunched together. It makes for a much smoother read. Thank you for sharing this lovely story.
07/19/09
A good story. It is intersting how many authors have thought back to thier teenage years for material for this topic. I like the conntrast between the teenage view of summer and the older church member. some great description.